Sunday, February 19, 2017

The IOC to a tolerable degree

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0B8gJL5Fe7uUzNHp3MVBKRVJELVk

Hopefully that's ^^ where you'll find my recording (you might need to download it to play it).
And now for the other stuff.

Annotations:

Notes:

Grading:


1 comment:

  1. Justin:
    I agree with your self-assessment for the most part- I'd probably go with a 5-6 for A & B, but everything else is spot-on. Here are some suggestions:
    Be sure to think about WHAT the author does to make you think of what the purpose of the passage is.
    As far as organization- keep linking back to that statement at the beginning of each part/section.
    I agree about the reader/effect...think about it like textual evidence of device/technique that supports thesis, what it's meaning is in the passage, and the effect/ what the reader should understand (why this technique/device as opposed to another...?)

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